There is a vividness to this image, which takes me back to family cars --back seat kids-- in the 1950s, that nearly transcends poetry and becomes psychic. Your economical style borders on esp. Beyond that I haven't a clue how you manage it but am glad you do.
Ripe with imagery and invokes vivid imagination. If you are under twelve I find it sweet. Over 16 I'm blushing!
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DeleteThere is a vividness to this image, which takes me back to family cars --back seat kids-- in the 1950s, that nearly transcends poetry and becomes psychic. Your economical style borders on esp. Beyond that I haven't a clue how you manage it but am glad you do.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Geo. What a nice comment. I appreciate this very much.
DeleteI was never able to resist a ponytail… or a back seat.
ReplyDeleteHa! love it ... :))
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