Friday, October 18, 2013

Seminole Canyon


             ... seminole canyon / JB and I are falling apart

                                                                                     ... night pressed against our backs 
                                                                              
                           ... the cold light of distant stars





8 comments:

  1. Yes, despite the warm fire the stars are cold and distant when a couple is falling apart. Sad.

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  2. Lonely, haunting, even sad but still I see a certain sense of hope here.

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    1. We have remained good friends, which is nice.

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  3. Keep the warm fire built up and remember, those stars will always be there.

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  4. A very sad poem. Guess we have all been there. Probably more than once. An unpleasant part of life that must be endured.
    I like it better when you are bathed in sunshine and happiness.

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    1. I suppose it isn't love itself that hurts but the expectations we place on it ... thank you so much, Steven...

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