Sunday, July 31, 2016

A Week Before Fifth Grade

                                 ... a week before fifth grade my horse said enough is enough

              ... and threw me off 

                                     ... my arm in a cast / mother sat at the foot of my bed ... sang away the pain





Photograph by Julian Mofteescu

8 comments:

  1. A micro-poem we can relate to here at my household, Teresa. We have two horses — one of them white like the one in your photo — and my wife has had her share of injuries.

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    1. It's easy to forget through their soft beauty that they are powerful animals ... no horse now but those years were golden.

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  2. I spent my childhood around horses and liked them very much but was afraid to ride them. Perhaps I still am --respectful of their strength, mainly. I delight in the photo, which I recognize equine anterior but my primitive parts see the aft-end of a Brontosaurus. I delight in 2 other things as well: I did not mention or pass on this phobia to my children, and I delight in your poem.

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    1. Horse, Brontosaurus .... I can see that ... :))

      Thank you, Geo. for reading and commenting ... much appreciated.

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  3. Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Your words once again illuminating the visual, especially, for me - "mother sat at the foot of my bed ... sang away the pain" .

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    1. Thank you, Penny. I am so grateful for your response. :)

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  4. I love the story told in your poem! A friend has a horse who looks like that one and he's a great horse, although prone to biting a little. It's part of his sense of humor.

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    1. It's one of those memories still so fresh in my mind ... it was also a life altering event. It woke me to my vulnerability at a young age ... my mother's presence made all the difference.

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