Friday, October 16, 2015

At Natural Bridges


            ... at Natural Bridges



                                                                                                        .... standing on a cold ledge


                                                     ........ our long black goodbye





Photograph by Paula

17 comments:

  1. A powerful and stark image. Very few words work best here.

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  2. There's a fall off that dark ledge, sometimes bottomless and becomes part of us. Sometimes it's only a inch or so. Still here.

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  3. Forever remembered and maybe enhanced by location.

    He lives but not before being much more than just scared.

    Es un buen dia hoy.

    Every new one will feel like that for quite awhile I believe.

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    1. It's so good to hear from you ... I can only imagine how very scary it was ... glad it blew over so to speak and you're still standing ... the price for living in paradise .. :))

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    2. Forever remembered and maybe enhanced by location.

      That was meant for your poem that said volumes.

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  4. It's still confusing Teresa. My first sentence "Forever remembered and maybe enhanced by location" was meant for your poem. Very powerful three sentence poem. No wonder I confuse people. No response needed.

    I think that covers it.

    SHEEZ!

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    1. I did understand that clarification, Tom ... you've probably been there, I imagine ... Natural Bridges ... it's all good ... :)

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    2. And thank you for saying, "Very powerful three sentence poem," I appreciate the comment. :)

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  5. Because I have been there was able to immediately place myself there under those circumstances. It is easy to feel the intensity of those moments.

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    1. Yes, I'm glad you felt that ... you understand ...

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