Friday, July 3, 2015

The Last Time I Saw You


                                ... the last time I saw you

                                                                          ... I was in the elevator watching the doors close

            ... mouthing goodbye

                                             ... like we'd both lost our hearing

                                                                                                      




Photograph by Mel Lindstrom
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4 comments:

  1. Geo.July 3, 2015 at 10:41 PM

    There is a general identification with this tableau. For me, it was through a rain-streaked window in Oklahoma, 1968. I was heading for Texas, then California, and never returned. The image remains.

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    1. Teresa EvangelineJuly 3, 2015 at 11:28 PM

      "... through a rain-streaked window in Oklahoma ..." sounds like the first line to a possible poem ... :)

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  2. shoreacresJuly 6, 2015 at 7:04 AM

    I remember making a comment to someone in just that manner. He never heard it of course, But I did. Perhaps that was the point.

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