Monday, September 15, 2014

Van Gogh Eyes


               ... december nineteen hundred and ninety six

                                                                            ... he sits on the kitchen counter

                                 ... van gogh eyes / beard the color of autumn


                                                                                               ... pours me another glass of rosanne cash






10 comments:

  1. My eldest son is orange --his emphatic, early preference to redhead-- and might resemble Vincent, only with more ears.

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  2. "pours me another glass of Roseanne Cash" one of your best poetic lines ever. Wow!

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  3. I'm certain you will hear this again and again, but, such a good line is so worthy of repeating:

    "pours me another glass of rosanne cash"

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    1. That line came out of a fellow poet helping me to see more poetically ... see the possibilities in two lines becoming one ... It was a valuable lesson for me ... Thank you!

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  4. I just want to echo what the comments above say--"pours me another glass of roseanne cash" is a great line/lyric!

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  5. Loved this T...gotta get here more often! ;)))

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