Wednesday, April 2, 2014

Water's Edge


                          ... wanting to get eye to eye with a lady's slipper

       ... we lay beneath the cedar at water's edge

                                                           ... my mouth on damp moss made promises I couldn't keep






Photograph by Montucky: montucky.wordpress.com
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2 comments:

  1. Geo.April 2, 2014 at 6:30 PM

    Hello! There is a use of ampliative induction in your poems that I haven't encountered outside of haiku, but yours is subtler, gentler. My compliments. Following.

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    1. Teresa EvangelineApril 2, 2014 at 6:40 PM

      Hi Geo, and Welcome! I had to look up "ampliative induction," sensing what it is, but preferring definitions. I like what I found. There should be, and I believe there is, a science behind all Life. Thank you for the compliment and the follow.

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